newschool099: CATW # 5: " In the article ' How to do One Thing at a Time' by Nancy Jones in Women's health magazine, the author begins to explain that a lar..."
She understood the article and has made the claim by agreeing with the author . She quotes two studies and uses two examples but tends to lose the thought by not explaining correctly . Sentence structure needs some work ( to long or run on sentences ). Grammer needs a little attention. overall i can make sense of her essay.
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